ryanson209's poetry/song thread

[ryanson209]

Wow. A section for art/poetry/songs/stories. Oh, yeah. On FictionPress.com, I'm a poet (really, I'm a songwriter) by the name of Midnight Fist. I'm going to sample some of my songs' lyrics here. My first sample: "Where's the magic?"

"I know nothing about what's pouring in your hands.
Our touching lips have met before.
We as one know the bare truth that he demands,
But we have never quarreled before.
The question's not how we became accustomed
To this neverending war.
But, we must ask why this is what he seeks to come
And rid us forevermore.

These bad habits. These bad habits.
When will goodness of heart win the race?
We've quarreled and not understood,
Where's the magical place?

(I want to hold your hand.)
You hold my heart high,
And make me wish I could not cry.
For magic is not gone forever; it's romance weather.
(I wanna hold your hand.)
You hold my heart high,
And it seems to fly.
It's love for you is quite enough.
I know your feelings are quite too tough,
But please answer!"

You like?

[ryanson209]

A song made by me, I'll just post the shortened version of it here. (Oh, and when I make songs, I pretend that they are replacing songs in other anime, especially since I hope to become an animator. This one is s'possed to replace Kenshin's ending, 'heart of sword - Yoake Mae.')

When I am alone, tommorow feels far away,
And I must go over still into the darkness of dawn.
If I play it straight, it will no doubt fail,
And tonight, to you, I'm nothing more than a pawn.

[KaitlinRainey]

I really like it. It's deep. ^_^

[MaisalG]

Oh I love it. I'd love to hear the whole thing. Can PM it to me if you want. You don't have to if you want to keep it to yourself. But I like the little piece you posted.

[ryanson209]

YAY!!! PPL LIKES ME SONGS! Hmm... if I could just download that movie (it's a movie I made with Jap. verson of that song, with anime ppl I based my anime off of... so it's mine officialy). Any way, i'll add ALL of me song to me siggy, and you people will CLAP AT IT!!! MUWUHAHAHA!!

[ryanson209]

Crap, I CAN'T put it on my signature... here it is, anyways...

"When I am alone, tommorow feels far away
And I must go over still into the darkness of dawn
If I try to play it straight, it will no doubt fail
And tonight, to you, I'm nothing more than a pawn

You can't see all my hard efforts it's only result
Is that it makes no sense. Can I have lost my mind?
More effort means I am more likely to leave with you
But can you stop for a moment and, to me, be kind?

Hiding myself
Hoping that we
Live as a couple
With a family

When I am alone, tommorow feels far away
And I must go over still into the darkness of dawn
The darkness gained from you is unbelievable
And I hope I am still not your pawn

I think the balance sheet of my life is messed up
If I add it all up, will it equal zero?
I just want to be alone this dark and stormy night
And, if something bad happens, I will be your hero

You just don't know
You can change your own
Logic at will
In your loan

Please leave me alone, I don't wish to speak
But the darkness of dawn is clouding my mind
I cannot sleep no more I can't think at all
And to make my thoughts straight, you will be kind

Please leave me alone, I don't wish to speak
But the darkness of dawn is clouding my mind
I cannot sleep no more I can't think at all
And to make my thoughts straight, you will be kind

When I am alone, tommorow feels far away
And in the darkness of dawn, I have to go
We are still in love. Don't think anything else
And my thoughts are in shape. I must go."

It gets confusing at times, yet, it feels like me, 'cause it's MY WORK, and i'm not afraid to sing it (not matter what kind of glass breaks!!!)

[ryanson209]

Again, a song I wrote (just recently... about 5 minutes ago) that I based off an anime song... it's called 'Everlasting Train.'

"When I gaze up at that darkened blue sky,
A smile falls off and's replaced with a frown.
But there are things that even I just don't know.
Why is that sky way so too high?
But there are more sad times walking above,
And happiness that goes down the drain.
I feel deceived and walk where I ran.
This traveler is still in love!

I only want to tell you, spreading my map,
I used to walk past many, many great chaps,
And now I start to run, for it is leaving me.
Yes, it is that everlasting train.
My prayers only reach God in my dreams.
And, seeking guidance is not like a king.
It may be be good to cry... it may be good to laugh...
I need to lose all my pain!"

it is confusing, but it is also a TV sized version. Tell me what ya think of it!

[otakuharuko]

I think that poem/song is amazing. Your very good and if you have any other poems/songs please post them. I'd like to read more of them.

[ryanson209]

Well, whenever I try and post a poem/song (all songs with poetry thingies), no one ever replies. So, if ya wanna read a poem, go here and read, review, and wait for me to change certain unwanted lyrics: http://www.fictionpress.com/~midnightfist ... and if you want to review sanity's requiem, too late. I will soon erase it with my busy life...

[ryanson209]

Ok, I know it's been a while, but I wanna give a poem I made. It's called "Hold my Hand," and like my other poems, it's based off an anime theme song. This one's based off of the original Dragonball GT Theme Here goes:

"Bit by bit, my heart is charmed by you.
Dazzle me with that smile that you
Smile at me with. Let's race
Away from this darkened place.
Hold my hand!

You see, I remember when we met.
I know the day and time and yet,
That treasure is gone,
And, of you, I'm so fond...
And I asked for a dance,
And you said no, and away you pranced.
The wind pierced me...
The shadows scared me...
(And all I think about is you...)

There are people, and times
That are affected by the steps that are mine.
Holding love, courage, and pride,
I'll fight and take what is mine!

Bit by bit, my heart is charmed by you!
The small piece of hope is still gone with you.
Anyone who wants to have eternity
With them, they will face me.
No matter what you think of pretending,
There are some things that have no enemies,
Hey, I do love you, but this
Is not good like our last kiss.
Hold your hand!"

Rate it from 1-10 please!!!

[ryanson209]

Ok, Midnight Fist here, with another poem sample. It's called "SHout It Loud." Here goes:

"During a very boring night, a boring morning is not what I expected to wake up to.
I will jump to tommorow and run with feathered shoes. I hope that you're awake too.

Shout it loud! With love, I will wake you from the nightmare you're in.
Shout it loud! With love, I will say the magic words that mean only I can
Shout it loud! Oh yeah, shout it loud!

As I watch over the city
That I love, the morning
Glow covers everything.
The day looks better everyday...
I will run with you!
I hope you love me too!!"

I hope you people read it.

[BeatExeter710]

It sounds more like a song than a poem... :slaugh: But its good. Keep on writing!

[ryanson209]

Hello... welcome to "Yo momma and you..." ok, jk, here's my newest poem:

Soaring through the clouds, I'm gonna Fly Away! (Fly away...)
Spreading my wings, I feel the power of today.
I'm kicked in the face, I feel a fire storm! (Fire storm...)
Can't you feel it killing, burning, as we mourn!?

If there was ever a dinosaur...
In a mound of icicles...
I would train it to ride a ball!

Let's go! We must go!
No matter if there was anything alive,
Nothing can stop me now!
Let's go! We must go!
Oh, my heart keeps sparking up like a fire hive.
And yes it does goes pow!!
Shocking!

Don't you feel it, I rode a Flying Car! (Flying car...)
Coming down, the ride makes me panic, near and far.
Taking the beautiful route, I feel a melting ball! (Melting ball...)
When I ride, the world goes faster. Let's give it our all.

There is no time for me to start to cry...
I've got to get started now...
Adventures are taking my life away!

Let's go! We must go!
Got so much space inside my thoughtless head,
I'll learn so much from the place!
Let's go! We must go!
I'm Ultra Z! I'm gonna race!
Smile! Ai-yai-yai-yai-yai!!

Let's go! We must go!
No matter if there was anything alive,
Nothing can stop me now!
Let's go! We must go!
Oh, my heart keeps sparking up like a fire hive.
And yes it does goes pow!!
Shocking!

Like it? Don't? TELL ME!!!

[daniellegirl]

not bad. interesting poem. i should post one of mines in here. good job ryan. i like it. a sang the first paragraph because it had a harmonious flow.

[Lil' Blue Angel]

I like it, Let's go! we must go! stayed in my head I don't know why its kinda catchy.

[ryanson209]

Yay! If you like it, you might like my other "catchy" poem/songs... i just need to get a singer, and get some music, than you might here it on the radio!!! ^_^

[ryanson209]

Well, ladies and gentlemen, it's my first ever song!
It's been a year and a half since I posted it on fictionpress, so here it is!

"Ai, just on my love.
I want to protect you with these hands from up above.

Do you know real men? Here's how to check.
They're weak to the women the want to protect.
I just want to know is he kinder than me?
I just want to know is he stronger than me?

I stare at the full moon all night.
Wonderin' if I can bring back the light.
I will push back the darkness with all my might.

Ai, just on my love.
I want to protect you with these hands from up above.
Love, you can call it, but annihilation
Truly is not from heaven!

Anywhere is okay. A light kiss is okay.
Love and dreams. With me, it's all okay.
You have a dream. You're entangled all night.
The red moon shines so brightly to keep back the light.
Love is only love.
My broken heart left unfixxed because of above.
But, really, love destroys greed.
That is what the darkness has to feed.

I would want you, you should know that, right?
A guy with falling tears is forcing out all his might.
Our touching lips would be be violent.
But is there anything wrong with that?

I stare at the full moon all night.
Wonderin' if I can bring back the light.
I will push back the darkness with all my might.

Ai, just on my love.
This hand is holding you up above.
Love, can you stand up by yourself, woman?
If not, I'll help you walk to heaven!

I stare at the full moon all night.
Wonderin' if I can bring back the light.
I will push back the darkness with all my might.

Ai, just on my love.
I want to protect you with these hands from up above.
Love, you can call it, but annihilation
Truly is not from heaven!

Ai, just on my love.
This hand is holding you up above.
Love, can you stand up by yourself, woman?
If not, I'll help you walk to heaven! "

Like it? Don't? BITE ME OR RATE IT!!!

[daniellegirl]

god you write well. sensitivity is cool in guys. lol well antoehr great one. i like this one better than the other one.

[ryanson209]

I only write sensitiivily.... how ever you spell it. In real life, I'm just a tad more sensitive than normal pervs, but I'm a perv too! *shifty eyes* Damn you, Satan!!!

[Vash's Trigun]

this ones pretty damn good bro, i like it alot

[Lil' Blue Angel]

yea, good poem keep em comin.

[ryanson209]

Ok, ok *shoves people and screaming fan girls away from him* Thankies!!!

[ryanson209]

Here's a new/old poem/song called "Shout it Loud!"

During a very boring night, a boring morning is not what I expected to wake up to.
I will jump to tommorow and run with feathered shoes. I hope that you're awake too.

Shout it loud! With love, I will wake you from the nightmare you're in.
Shout it loud! With love, I'll say the magic words that means only I can
Shout it loud! Oh, yes, Shout it loud!

While looking over the city
That I love, the morning
Glow covers nothing.
The day looks better everyday.
I will run with you.
I hope you love me too...

I won't cry when my three wishes are used up. It's like I'm in the same nightmare you were in last night.
A new truth appears. The color is so faint, I can barely see it fight...

Shout it loud! With love, I will wake you from the nightmare you're in.
Shout it loud! With love, I'll say the magic words that means only I can
Shout it loud! Oh, yes, Shout it loud!

In the future, I can see
Us going somewhere.
The day does not end there...
In your heart, our hope...
It will run away.
I do hope you stay.

During a very boring night... a very boring blues awaits...all since yesterday, I have not woken up.
I will jump to tommorow... and run with feathered shoes. I yell... HURRY! HURRY! HURRY UP!!!

Shout it loud! With love, I will wake you from the nightmare you're in.
Shout it loud! With love, I'll say the magic words that means only I can
Shout it loud! Oh, yes, Shout it loud!

Your dream keeps going, and I
Can't stop it from falling.
I hope a bell starts to ring.
Without stopping, I do wait..
For you to come with me!
For you to come with me!

While looking over the city
That I love, the morning
Glow covers nothing.
The day looks better everyday.
I will run with you.
I hope you love me too...

[Lil' Blue Angel]

Shout it loud! Shout it loud! again with these catchy peoms, lol. I liked it

[ShadowKnight15]

I personaly dont like how it repeats that same phrase over and over more of something you find in a song..

Pick if it is a poem or a song..gezz, one or the other. Even though most songs are certain types of poems

[ryanson209]

Meh?
Ok, they're songs!!!

[CapnCrooked]

Good poem, just quit having conversations in your posts. Same for you, Daniellegirl. if you want to talk back and forth and ask questions, do it over a PM (you can turn on the ability to send/recieve PM's in your UserCP).

[Bx_GrL227]

hey great poem, really enjoyed it

[coconut tea bag]

*sob* That was so nice *sob* You really are very good in writing

[ryanson209]

Here's another of my partly-famous songs... this is my newest song called "Run Away."

I swear that I feel something pulling me
The darkness wants to take this.
Singing the song of a soldier,
Dancing away while we kiss.

There is someone dancing in my heart,
Maybe the answers lie there.
Throwing away all the evil,
It will show justice everywhere.

Run away! Hurry before
They attack us in the dark of night.
Run away! Hurry before
They attack! We must show them the light.

I swear that I feel something pulling me
The light of the town goes out.
Singing the song of the soldier,
I feel there is a message I must shout.

There is someone dancing in my heart,
Illuminating with the light.
Maybe justice is not supposed
To show people what is right.

Run away! Hurry before
They attack us in the dark of night.
Run away! Hurry before
They attack! We must show them the light.

We will fight for justice!

It applies to all!

There is something I'd like to say!

In this day and age, death is around the corner!

It competes with justice to draw you nearer!

We must fight together!

The evil must be shown that there is no competition!!

Even in my dream, the bird of fire flies,
It holds the power of love.
I hope it freezes and stops time,
So we can at last live above.

There is someone dancing in my heart,
Maybe the answers lie there.
Throwing away all the evil,
It will show justice everywhere.

Run away! Hurry before
They attack us in the dark of night.
Run away! Hurry before
They attack! We must show them the light.

Run away! Hurry before
They attack us in the dark of night.
Run away! Hurry before
They attack! We must show them the light.

Like it? Don't? Then mega-byte me!!

[Vash's Trigun]

bro yet again, another fine ass song( yo i think maybe we should collaborate lol) but yeah that was real good i like wat ur messages in all ur songs.. deep bro real deep

[ryanson209]

Hello. Here's another song/poem because I'm bored.

"Bit by bit, my heart is charmed by you.
Dazzle me with that smile that you
Smile at me with. Let's race
Away from this darkened place.
Hold my hand!

You see, I remember when we met.
I know the day and time and yet,
That treasure is gone,
And, of you, I'm so fond...
And I asked for a dance,
And you said no, and away you pranced.
The wind pierced me...
The shadows scared me...
(And all I can think of is you..)

There are people, and times
That are affected by the steps that are mine.
Holding love, courage, and pride,
I'll fight and take what is mine!

Bit by bit, my heart is charmed by you!
The small piece of hope is still gone with you.
Anyone who wants to have eternity
With them, they will face me.
No matter what you think of pretending,
There are some things that have no enemies,
Hey, I do love you, but this
Is not good like our last kiss.
Hold your hand!

You know that I like you, but this
Has to stop so we can kiss.
It has nothing to do with you,
It's just I'm angry and blue.
As for me, I dream like always,
Yet I can't get the feeling that you stargaze
For the right guy. Well,
I'm right here, so don't yell.

I still wish that we had more
Of a conversation, and it could pour.
My questions are piled up like your love,
And so we leap for up above!

Bit by bit, my heart is charmed by you!!
I'm amazed that I'm still beside you.
I call your name in the light,
and I hope we don't fight.
No matter what you think of me,
There will be some part of me
That is stuck in your mind.
I wonder if I'm closer to being kind.
Hold my hand... "

Like it? Don't? BITE ME!!!

[PaxBuddy]

i like it!

how did you come across these lyrics? heartbreak?

[Vash's Trigun]

another good song/poem keep em commming ( dood u gotta IM me sum time lol)

[jenniferv13]

Nice!!! great job have more post it it would be nice to read more

[Lil' Blue Angel]

Wow, you always seem to come up wit good song/poems like Vash said keep em comin.

[ryanson209]

Yay! This one has the most... (counts) yeah! i think this one has the most replies! thankies! i gots more from the past... and a few new ones coming SOON!!!

[ShadowKnight15]

Wow...very nice, possibly one of your best, no?

[ryanson209]

Here it is, the OTHER MOMENT you've been waiting for... my new song/poem, "Everlasting Train..." it has strange rhymes... you have to be SMART to find the rhymes...

"At times, I don't remember, none of the things.
Not even what I did yesterday.
I thought I might be free, and live 'til I'm king,
Yet that is only in my dreams.
Everyone is so busy thinking about
The unimportant things we know of.
As a never ending traveler,
I just don't know, what is this about?!

I only want to tell you, spreading my wings
How many times I piled up dreams.
I began to walk, and I wanted to ride,
Ride that everlasting train.
I will not lose, even though it's not my life.
I will go where ever my heart's not felt life.
I will leave now... kick me away...
I need to lose all my pain!

When I gaze up at that darkened blue sky,
A smile falls off and's replaced with a frown.
But there are things that even I just don't know.
Why is that sky way so too high?
But there are more sad times walking above,
And happiness that goes down the drain.
I feel deceived and walk where I ran.
This traveler is still in love!

I only want to tell you, spreading my map,
I used to walk past many, many great chaps,
And now I start to run, for it is leaving me.
Yes, it is that everlasting train.
My prayers only reach God in my dreams.
And, seeking guidance is not like a king.
It may be be good to cry... it may be good to laugh...
I need to lose all my pain!

Even if the seasons change something,
Even if I am left behind with the king,
I won't turn around. I will stay here.
I will chase that everlasting train!
Keep the happiness inside my mind,
I am a real person who is really kind.
I will chase the train... right into the skies...
The future will rid me of pain! "

Like it? Don't? BITE ME!!!

[Lil' Blue Angel]

lol, how many poem/songs do you have? I guess im not as smart as i thought cuz i only found some of the rhymes. I still liked it either way, keep em comin.

[ryanson209]

Ok... since this is my permanent song/poem link, I'd like to post the newest song/poem, straight from my head! It's called "We've Got Power!"

Chaos comes from all sides, let's defend!
You probably became the leader of the party...
The hunt goes well, we must now become men!
I might just die like the hundred before me...

It is accustomed to make you feel right...
Even if the person you love just wants to fight!

No can do, I'm empty as a bottle!
Play games with me later as a model!
My trouble causes much pain
But there has to be something to gain
We've got power! Come get the dragon to see...
Let's go!

Kick the can, it's not boring, it's fun!
Suprises make the world go around...
The future of the flower girls are not done!
Amusing everyone that have been found...

If the love of your life just dumped you...
Don't just stand there, find someone else who won't make you blue!

No can do, I'm still getting ready!
Ready for the beginning of a century!
Let me gaze upon you
Please don't let me be blue
We've got power! Come get the dragon to see...
Let's go!

It is accustomed to make you feel right...
Even if the person you love just wants to fight!

No can do, I'm empty as a bottle!
Play games with me later as a model!
My trouble causes much pain
But there has to be something to gain
We've got power! Come get the dragon to see...
Let's go! "

Like it? Don't? BITE ME!!!