i made a new poem

[melchior]

although it appears i have gone crazy,

has it ever came to that i am special,

have you ever thought about how i feel-

have you thought that there is someone in this world other than yourself.

what ever happen to the time when people respect each other,

whats wrong with people-

have they never seen and emotiom,

are they blind to how i feel.

if so,

i can see y they think i am crazy,

but if i am-

i am crazy in love with you.
end.

this poem didnt rhyme but it is better than my first one i posted.. i think it is good no matter what you all think..

(all rights reserved)(no copying without my permission)

[StreetDisciple]

although it appears i have gone crazy,

has it ever came to that i am special,

have you ever thought about how i feel-

have you thought that there is someone in this world other than yourself.

what ever happen to the time when people respect each other,

whats wrong with people-

have they never seen and emotiom,

are they blind to how i feel.

if so,

i can see y they think i am crazy,

but if i am-

i am crazy in love with you.
end.

this poem didnt rhyme but it is better than my first one i posted.. i think it is good no matter what you all think..

(all rights reserved)(no copying without my permission)
DOnt you have to do more than just say copy right i thoguht you had to get a patent or something? it was........ok..