tell me what u guys think of this poem

[xxbattousaixx]

ok this poem is called Love of my life

If i were to love but once
I pray that one love to be you
For your love is an abundance of all
It fulfills me in a way none other has
or ever could

For you have given me happiness
You have brought a bright Shining Light
of eternal brilliance into my life
I am in awe of you and the wonder you are

For you give when giving seems impossible
You bring joy to my heart when
life has gone astray
Your love comforts me when the world
crumbles down around me
It gives me strength to awake to another day

It is you that I devote myself willingly
Without remorse forsaking all other, 'tis true
For you are the love for which
I have waited a lifetime
Thus, I shall spend a lifetime love you.

This is to a girl that i love, but tell me what u guys think of it alrite?

[AnGeL15]

Cute!!!! Aw!!!!!!

[Huntress]

I think you have potential; this is really good.

[yhyh02]

i really like it is it for a boyfrend or something because its great and u should go for it!!

[xxbattousaixx]

nah its for a girl,

[xxbattousaixx]

but if any girls want to take this for their bf go ahead, i dont mind at all

[VchaosV]

another teeny love poem.. ive read billions like that... no offense

[platinumtitan]

good poem. yeah that girl will love you forever if you show also with actions and not just words alone.

[T-Virus002]

There shall be happyness comming out of this if u give it to her or acutally recite it for her! Yeah man recite it for her its good and it would be better if it came from your mouth instead of a paper.