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hoodedslayer676
05-22-2004, 01:59 PM
By: Brian Curtis (hoodedslayer676)

We are living in a world full of h*te,
selfishness is the string,
and deception is the bait.
Hate is us the hook the human race,
we are spreading bl*od all over the place.
In the human race we d**troy one another,
some people even k*ll their mother.
While other people kill for greed,
as humans peace is what we need.

The End
As someone once said,"The human race was built to detroy one another".

NightNGaleX3x
05-29-2004, 08:22 PM
That's an excellent poem. It's very in depth to what I feel at times.

AnGeL15
05-30-2004, 10:06 PM
awwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!

CapnCrooked
06-01-2004, 04:54 AM
Post in the poetry thread next time please (see sticky at the top of this area).

Good stuff, but why are only some of the words *'d out?

hoodedslayer676
06-01-2004, 11:32 AM
becuase I was sort of in a hurry when I was typing this, but anyway thanks for the feedback.

AznGuyMateo
06-01-2004, 04:03 PM
that was a g0*d po*m...

KaitlinRainey
06-01-2004, 05:46 PM
Love the poem, hoodedslayer676. You're very talented. ^_^

xxbattousaixx
06-01-2004, 07:36 PM
nice poem u got there

LuciferMarik
10-15-2004, 03:14 PM
yes it is very good ^-^

HimuraKenshin56
10-15-2004, 03:53 PM
good poem very good