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[RdwllFrk13]

I made this poem and my teacher is like wow, but, teachers are like that

My Black Heart

With the wars brewing,
Wuth my only black heart,
I strode onto the fighting.
Strode into that part.

Alongside those men,
with each their evil past,
And my only black heart.
Our weapons we cast.

With the yelling, screaming.
With darkness of its own,
My black heart kept fighting.
Fighting, until blood shown.

With my only black heart.
My eyes, so red,
Blind from whom shot me,
Walking away, leaving me for dead.

Though through the pain felt,
from that evil dart,
Light shone through me for the first time.
Right through the hole, in my black heart.

Rate it from 1-10
If you don't like it, rate it anyways

[BeatExeter710]

Um.. I didn't actually read through the while thing but the parts that I did read, I liked. I rate the first quarter of the poem an 8

[RdwllFrk13]

I can't make a good poem unless i feel for it. Oh, and I can't make a Happy poem either. I just can't make anything deep with happiness. So, darkness is deep to me.

[Sage]

10 out of 10

[AltoSaxFinest]

9 out of ten. good poem.

[animepunk]

I don't do poems...... but that was great, 9

[hoodedslayer676]

good job 7 out of 10. It's good but I noticed a couple errors. Anyway good job.

[CrakinCapn]

It's nice, a 8 is swellified. :D

[Hopeless]

uhhh.....8 out of 10, nice ^_^

[FallenWings]

I had a good time reading it. You put a whole lot of imagery in it too. good poem. 9 out of 10.

[Dart082]

that was pretty good, i liked it neways. i rate it an 8

[xxbattousaixx]

nice i give it a 7

[XxXSoraXxX]

10 out of 10

[KaitlinRainey]

10 out of 10. It's very good. ^_^

[platinumtitan]

who loves orange soda?! kel loves orange soda! ya your poem was tight, but a ten bro....why not? 10! superstar!

[AznGuyMateo]

NOOOOO I HAt....... just playing it was actually pretty good....... id give u a 11 but u said to rate it a 1-10 so ill give u a.......10..... and rate it again so you get a.....1..... that way youll get the 11 u deserve


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