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sublime
05-10-2004, 10:23 PM
Halted:
The world has stopped revolving, I cant believe my eyes. No death, no pain, no suffering. The truth beyond demise. The world has seised its spinning, I think cant be sane. Reality of yonder days, go flushing down the drain. The sensations I am feeling, come upon when I'm in bed, are all falling to me. Reality, I am dead.

War World:
The world we know is crumbling, Our beliefs are all found false. The blasts, the bombs, the battleing, interfear with our lives. Peace is not an option, war is all we see. The guns and all the violence, is what they think we need. The death and all the darkness, has consumed all that we can see. The war world is cumbling, because of you and me.


Enjoy!

Lunatic High
05-10-2004, 10:27 PM
before anyone else tells you via flames, let me just tell you... don't keep making new threads for all your poems. post your new ones in the Poetry Cafe or in your previous poetry thread. just a heads up.

aside from that little matter, nice work =)

Hopeless
05-10-2004, 10:35 PM
Very good but like lunatic said just put all your poems into one topic

sublime
05-10-2004, 10:58 PM
Ill be sure to do that next time, TY, sry for any inconvenience I have caused