Crushed Dreams: My Poem

[sublime]

This is my first poem that I am releasing to the cyber public. Check out my blog. Enjoy and tell me what you think.

Crushed Dreams
by Ryan S.

The world around me grows darker. The floor cracks, thw walls crumble, the ceiling of my hopes collapses in on me. My dreams nothing more than a pile of ashes, swept away by the corruption and greed of money. My life reveals to be a statue with no meaning. The revolving world is the artist of my demise. Will I too be incased in a prison of corruption as so many before me? The dreams of yonder days, nothing but memories and long forgotten hopes.

[Bride_of_Freddy]

..............Woah dude, that was pretty good. Such a big vocabulary...^___^

[Hopeless]

Thats pretty good.. hell that was awesome

[MaisalG]

Great! hee...I love reading poems...*smile*

[NightNGaleX3x]

It was very explicit. Short and sweet, to the point. Great ;)

[dressage-chick]

beautiful. more than that. great job. 2 thumbs up.

[sublime]

Wow, thanks people, it warms my heart (not really) to see that soo many people like my work. Around my house and with my friends my works aren't appreciated. TY!