Broken Angel
05-05-2004, 05:05 PM
Mary is known for giving as good as she gets. When Steve, trying to get her goat, told her she was ugly as sin, she was all over him like a tent. Who did he think he was, God's gift to women? Not on your life, thought Mary. She could spot a sitting duck when she saw one, and, in this case, Steve stuck out like a sore thumb. She went after him tooth and nail, calling him every name in the book, until he finally cried uncle and slunk away with his tail between his legs, a sadder but wiser man who learned his lesson the hard way.
Can anyone edit away all the cliches up there but still keep the story unchanged? Try to be as creative as possible.
Can anyone edit away all the cliches up there but still keep the story unchanged? Try to be as creative as possible.