New Poem!

[CrAzYaZnGuRl]

I wrote a new poem and I think it's fairly good... what do you guys think?

I can’t speak
My mind’s a blur
I can’t see
My words slur
I try to talk
But you can’t hear
I tried to help
Chase off your fear
Or was it mine
I can’t recall
I do remember
Feeling small
Sitting in the corner
Wondering why
I do some things
To make me cry
I want to remember
But I want to forget
Those happy times
That I often regret
What to do
When I can’t let go
But I want to stop thinking
And make it move slow
They wait for my entrance
They’re waiting for me
Time is calling my name
Can’t you see?
I have to leave
I can’t come back
I’m wiping my tears
I’ll leave it at that
Forget I was here
Don’t ask me why
But don’t be sad
Don’t even cry
You’ve given me a lot
And taught me what’s true
The meaning of love
Because I love you…

[MaisalG]

I love it. It was beautiful. *smile* I love reading poems. *reads it again* Keep writing. I like.

[KaitlinRainey]

I really like it. Wonderful job.

[hoodedslayer676]

I love it it sounds romantic and sad which I'm not one to show my emotions but it sort of got to me good job seriously.

[SimpsonsFreak]

very good poem, it is romatic and it rhymes

[MajinKenshin]

B-e-a-utiful.

[Lunatic High]

hehe... hahahahaha! all your poems are good! i don't know why i'm talking like this! bye!

[beachbabe]

Hey crazy it's ALLY!!! i loved it.. check out mine *carbon* and tell me what u think of it... urs i can really relate too... my bf and i just got in our first fight after a couple of months of dating and 2 years of knowing each other before that... it's been hard.. keep writing!

[Hopeless]

Awesome poem, keep up the good work