Just a poem

[RdwllFrk13]

I was bored and just did a poem.
If it stinks, o well, I dont rly care

From where does darkness grow?
From where does it creep
From where does it seep
From where does it live, and grow?

From where does darkness grow?
From where does it strike
From where is its spike
From where does it banish light, Where so?

From where does darkness grow?
From where is its dart
Which points out the part
Where humans play the role, but does not know

Except in their hearts

[Jenn]

aWe. That was pretty good..... I only like to write poems when i'm mad or depressed..... that way they always are deep.... lol.

[SimpsonsFreak]

Good poem you made. That's all I gotta say. It has a good meaning to it, I just wish I can make poems. I am bad at rhyming and even thinking up of a theme.

[MaisalG]

I like it. It is hard to rhyme things. I'm not much of a poem writer but when I do it I usually make up a unique theme for rhyming so that I can actually do it. Normally it is skipped between lines....line, line a, line, line b. And only the a and b lines would rhyme. I think I am beginning to sound confusing............anyway, I always can have the thought that poems don't have to rhyme at all. I like yours though, better than my poems, which are few. ha ha ha.

[KaitlinRainey]

Not bad at all. Keep up the good work! ^_~

[Tekken Punk]

Your eyes are burning through me
yet you continue to lie
i thought we had something going for us..
other than a car crash
betrayal is a knife in the back but remember..
revenge is mine
i trusted you but i forgot
a good secret is one well kept

im starting to think that
skulls and hearts arent that far apart
so u can thank ur self....
get over urself....
lets stop playing this chess game
checkers suits me better

[hoodedslayer676]

good job it shows emotion which makes alot of poems good. read my poem its under the name Dark Poem