Suz's Art^-^v

[Suzuka]

hey there..here si a drawing i did for a contest...i colored it on my comp. anyways..comments are much apprechiated. so what do you think?
http://uploads.dodart.net/contest_picture_inkedbackroundadded%20copy1.jpg

[SimpsonsFreak]

I think the drawing is okay. I think it could have been better, but I'm not much of an artist so I can't tell. But overall I think it was okay.

[Suzuka]

I think the drawing is okay. I think it could have been better, but I'm not much of an artist so I can't tell. But overall I think it was okay.
ya i know it could have been..^-^' i still need alot of work but thanks for your comment!

[Totebag]

I like it a lot. I like the color scheme, and it's very proportional, except one arm is a little short. I like it lots, though!

[Suzuka]

thanks!*looks at drawing* darn it..your right!>.O stupid arm...>.<' o well..
^-^' thanks again!

[TaggedUPDropOUT]

i like the art its real cool i draw too ya know

[NightmareMagma]

wow! I like the drawing! The color is really good.

[~-Kenji-~]

Wow that is pretty good better than me lol i hacvent been drawing much lately but i used to alot.... anyway great drawing and color

[Bishounen Lover]

I hope you don't mind some constructive criticism ^^

Well first off, her neck is a little too skinny for her body, and it makes her head look too big. So I'd suggest making her head a tad smaller. Also, since she's lifting her right arm up, her coller bone on the right side should be going upwards too. And as some other people pointed out, the arm at her side is shorter than the other one. Also, her hands are a bit iffy. The one at her side is ok, but the one she's lifting up looks a little off. I do like her pose though ^__^

It'd also look nicer if you added some shading to her body and the folds in her clothes.

[Suzuka]

I hope you don't mind some constructive criticism ^^

Well first off, her neck is a little too skinny for her body, and it makes her head look too big. So I'd suggest making her head a tad smaller. Also, since she's lifting her right arm up, her coller bone on the right side should be going upwards too. And as some other people pointed out, the arm at her side is shorter than the other one. Also, her hands are a bit iffy. The one at her side is ok, but the one she's lifting up looks a little off. I do like her pose though ^__^

It'd also look nicer if you added some shading to her body and the folds in her clothes.
thanks i don't mind actually the criticism is what i need..^-^' i'm not that great with hands..so thats why they sort of well..suck..>.< but thanks for the comments! oh btw i love your siggie! are you a Graviation Fan or Yami No Matsuei fan by any chance?*grins*

[Bride_of_Freddy]

hey there..here si a drawing i did for a contest...i colored it on my comp. anyways..comments are much apprechiated. so what do you think?
http://uploads.dodart.net/contest_picture_inkedbackroundadded%20copy1.jpg


I think it's wonderful. I'm an artest myself but I'm not so good at drawing the female figure, it angers me.

[Suzuka]

thanks!^-^ cool..i'd love to see your stuff sometimes..i'm not the best at drawing guys..although i'm not too shabby..^-^'

[MaisalG]

I like it. And don't worry about the arm being too short thing. I've looked through some of my old drawings and in one the character is wearing a dance leotard with a long train(sp?) that was swirling around her. So basically it blocked her waist...now when I look at it..I can see that her legs are over to the left a little to much...they aren't even with the body 0_o
...lol. Yep..we all have our times right. I think the drawing is good. I myself am not very good with bodies, but I keep getting better.

[Suzuka]

I like it. And don't worry about the arm being too short thing. I've looked through some of my old drawings and in one the character is wearing a dance leotard with a long train(sp?) that was swirling around her. So basically it blocked her waist...now when I look at it..I can see that her legs are over to the left a little to much...they aren't even with the body 0_o
...lol. Yep..we all have our times right. I think the drawing is good. I myself am not very good with bodies, but I keep getting better.
thanks!^-^' you should see some of my first drawings...they are a disaster...O.- but thanks again!^-^ i really apprechiate your comments!